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My Home Town


Before you visit my home town
I'll tell you a little about this lovely place
It is at the end of a quiet country road
Beyond a mountain pass which no one knows

If you are driving by and lose your way
If you find yourself here one day by chance
You won't find anyone to help you find the road out
Don't wait till eve for any help to come

If you stumble in on a moonlight night
Don't look up at the lighted sky
You don't want to see where your death comes from
It will be best for you as a surprise

Author notes

Sorry, it is not a very original story line.
Hope your imagination can add something to it in your mind.

Written March 6th, 2004

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  • Lakota
    March 6, 2004
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    so nice until I looked at the sky