Dear Hannah,
I write to you on this day to wish you a splendid birthday. I wish you all the greatest things in this world. I wish someday you can walk through the world with nary a care and be free like the eagles soaring high above. It has been a long time since we have had a nice lengthy talk and I’ve wondered how you have been doing. i hear you are due to be sixteen in 5 short days. I hope with all that is good in the world that you have a sweet 16th. I hope you wake up everyday and the sun shines on your world and the birds chirp and sing merrily as they go about their business. I hope you find things you search for every day and that you live a long and proud fulfilled life.
Here’s wishing you many best wishes
Emerald Jewel
Author notes
i wrote this in a letter format because i had writers block so it seemed like writing it in letter format was the way to go. i hope you enjoy it.
David
A contest entry
- My Sweet 16th Birthday by Misunderstood-Teen.
650 points, ended April 22, 5 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Very sweet.
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I think if I were to receive this letter on my 16th birthday from an old friend. I would be extremely touched. This is great, light, but not lacking sincerity or meaning. I thoroughly enjoyed the read.
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a write full of sweet wishes...lovely and lite...encouraging words...well done here...i think the letter form gives it a very personal touch...i dig it
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Hi, I'm sorry I aint been around to have a chat with you for ages. Maybe we can soon, I've been coming on a few days now, I think I am becoming readdicted to AP.
Thanks for entering my contest, and thanks for wishing me a happy birthday. It doesn't matter about the writers block, at least you entered. Thank you
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Good luck in the contest you have a interesting letter and it was a really nice read to. It was a pleasure to read.
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