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Today's the Day

Today’s the day
The day I fell in love with you
Today’s the day
I fell in a glorious way
And from that moment on I knew
Nothing would come between us two
Today’s the day

Author notes

Rondelet - Today is not the actual day I started dating my girlfriend, but I will most likely give this to her once we reach one year!

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  • Sam-I-Am
    April 15
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    Short and very sweet, I'm sure she'll love it
    Sam