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She is my love

her hair is silk ribbon ringlets, her smile warms my soul
eyes that give meaning to life, she moves with control
she a lady at best and goes for her goals
my heart is fortunate, to have her here
she is my sweet, my dear

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Guys point of view of a girl he loves.

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  • drapedindarkness
    April 16
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    A sweet little ditty about love is fine, You are lucky to have hearts to entwine


  • hyper thing
    April 15
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    it is really good
    great job young (or old) poet