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Dying to get there

dying to get there
the body is left behind
new me, old me blend

A contest entry

Happiness is sharing, and I thank you for coming here...

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  • islekine gold member
    April 23

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    Short and to the point!

    Well penned...thanks so much for entering!
    Best wishes always!


  • individuality gold member
    April 15

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    ah the spirit lives - every drop of experience is poured into the pool of love and life then we resurface and return to fill ourselves up once more - a good poem.