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Alone In The Dark

When the sky turns dark,
And the world goes quiet,
We sit and talk.
We have no care for the world around us,
All alone in this big world,
Me and you no one else.
Your my comfort,
My life,
My world,
My everything.
Without you there is no need to survive.
I am alone,
But i am not.
You are here,
But you are not.
All alone in the dark...
With you

Author notes

i was having a bad day and this was how i was feeling at the moment....it's been a pretty rough month....

how i feel right now...need some one to talk to... :(

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  • kitty23
    May 1

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    well im sure you're going to get through everything.
    your a big girl.
    so when were you going to tell me about your new boyfriend??
    I saw you at derrick days the paige told me about your boyfriend so i just figured it would be better not to have approached you at the time.
    But i hope your happy and i hope he makes you happy.
    Anyways great write.
    keep up the great write.
    love always,
    caitlyn.


  • xo-bailee-xo
    April 28
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    I LOVE IT!!!!! FABULOUS