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Reincarnation.(Triolet)

Reincarnation
Have lived before, will live many more
Maybe with beautification
Reincarnation
Perhaps a dud, perhaps a sensation
Always with future life in store
Reincarnation
Have lived before, will live many more

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  • islekine gold member
    April 23

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    Wonderful write!

    I like perhaps a dud....perhaps a senstion...lol
    thanks for entering! Best wishes in the contest and always!

  • Bad Bill
    April 19

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    I thoroughly enjoyed this. The return in the concluding lines to the opening two is a good metaphor for reincarnation in itself.

    Good one,
    Bill