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Just an Echo

  And this is how it all begins...

With just an echo
A directed thought
A glimpse of feeling
That something may be

And then it happens
That hope evolves into a temporary bliss
My mind knows this won't last
Yet my heart fights for something more

To soon, it seems; the time has run out
And the small bit of happiness in my life
Has fallen into great peril
Of becoming only a fading memory

I reach out and try to grab it
Clinging to it with all my might
But as I squeeze harder
It dissolves to naught but dust in my hand

And the wind steals it away
Carrying it to some far unknown place
I cry out for it to return
But my efforts are all in vain

Even though it is surely over
I hope some part of me shall remain with you
Be it just an echo
A pleasant whisper in the back of your mind

...And that is how it all ends

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  • sounds like rain
    September 16

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    the poem echoes of sadness

    I like the beginning and end of this poem, the two phrases tie the poem together nicely. It's very descriptive, I'm sorry you have been so sad :