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Fly (April.15.2009)

Fly

Everytime I close my eyes
I dream of the sky
Even caged birds are free inside
But no matter how hard I try
Still these broken wings won't fly
You don't know, you just don't know
When I'm alone at night, how much I cry
Let me go, let me fly

Let me fly
Let me fly
Just let me go
And let me fly

We have to say our goodbyes
You know that it's right
Because there's somewhere else for me
Somewhere in the sunlight
Where I can spread my wings and fly
Leave all this pain behind
And my heart will mend itself in time
Let me go, Let me fly

Let me fly
Let me fly
Just let me go
And let me fly

© Amanda Emlay 2009 (All Rights Reserved)

Author notes

Inspired by a very sad story. Dedicated to my little buddy.

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  • superstition
    April 29

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    This is beautiful, as always, Mandy. It's sad but delicate and serene in its wording. I loved that line about the caged birds free within the sky. That brought about great imagery. Excellent.

  • This can apply to so very many situations within life. Reminds me of the finally letting go period towards the end of a long tired relationship, the final days of an illness, the attempt to avoid the emotional whithering that can occur when release cannot be achieved.
    excellent write,
    Peace

  • This is a very beautiful poem. I love the rhythm that you establish in the first stanza and the idea that even caged birds are free is for me the truly heart-breaking line. I felt you lost a little bit of that rythm in the second stanza though when the rhym changes.