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Hidden Treasure

rainy droplet windows,
staring out at the storm;
and adventuring children
searching for eggs
in mud puddles

green grass
and april flowers
(bring may showers);
finding rain
            in the desert



drink it up

Author notes

All I can remember of Easter is rain, and searching for eggs in it. Since I've lived in Utah all my life, I love rain, and appreciate it.

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  • The Poetic Bandits gold member
    April 18

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    Thank you for entering!

    Thank you for sharing this easter memory with us here good luck in the contest!


    The Poetic Bandits


  • Haiku-bless-you silver member
    April 16

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    Yes, the weather this time of year does not always cooperate for Easter Egg hunts but the children still find a way to have fun. Thanks for sharing this thoughtful memory.

    Brother Dennis


  • Freed by Mercy silver member
    April 14
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    I bet the kids got a kick out of this. What fun!