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Some One to Adore


I sit alone in desperation
Sorrow and frustration.

Hoping for some one to call my name.
Hoping for some one to stop the pain.
Hoping for some one to share this flame.

This flame, I dare call love.

Let it be today.
Let the pain fade away.

Let me wake up in dream.
Lit up only by a hot sun beam.
Themed as loud as a virgin scream.

Themed and bathed in affection.

I know some day I'll get mine.
But god please send me a sign.

I don't know how long I can last.
I can already hear the bullet blast.
Please hurry, make it fast.

Make it some one I'll adore.

Author notes

Even douchbags feel lonely some times lol Acctually it was something I wrote to get five hundred dollars on a writing contest. But apparently the word virgin was too much and I said FUCK YOU GUYS. I really didn't need the FIVE HUNDRED DOLLAS. LOL Bubble boy

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  • I really feel like you know me.
    This is great.


  • emokiddpoet
    April 14

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    Oh my I have never read a poem I can relate to more than this one...I am in the same mindframe and I appreciate this poem alot Well written