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A Moment For You

  For with each step I take these grains of sand below
my feet go on for miles.
wondering how many people, before me have walked
these same steps.
The sound of the wave's making your very soul seem rested.
The wind as it blow's through your hair makes you feel so
free.
Foot steps wash away as to hold your presence a secret.
so that you may hold this moment
all for you.


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  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    September 3

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    Humm..this is a mystic poetry revealing the stories of the souls and this makes us known to the truth of the mysteries behind of the life which we live around..love the work..great write indeed...


    • WhisperingSpirit
      September 3
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      Thank you my friend for stopping by to read my words.
      Your comments mean alot to me.
      Always nice to hear from you.


  • raggyann
    July 13

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    oh the feel of the wind in your hair
    and the snd on your fet
    the oceans smell
    its all a beautiful wonder


  • Puppydog gold member
    April 15

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    BEAUTIFUL!!! SO RELAXING!!!!

    Ah, the sands of an ocean beach and the sound of the waves coming in! So many have come to the beach just to find the peace and serenity they can't find elsewhere. 's