Darkness has fallen and shadows appear
through trees the wind whispers your name
As I listen for signs of your nearness
my heart prays the you feel the same
The evening creates a sweet melody
The twinkle of stars shine above
If you look in my eyes you'll see longing
And here in my heart you'll find love
Come dance with me in the moonlight
Hold me close under the stars
Kiss me and taste of my passion
Come claim this love that is ours
Spin me 'round under the heavens
Move with me like we are one
Watch me with eyes full of promise
Celebrate love we've begun
Stepping out of the shadows you join me
I'm wrapped in a welcome embrace
We sway for awhile to sounds of the night
I look up to love on your face
In warm eyes I see passion reflected
Love helps me let go of my past
Easily leaving my fears far behind
Tonight I have come home at last
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"The evening creates a sweet melody
The twinkle of stars shine above
If you look in my eyes you'll see longing
And here in my heart you'll find love"
I love that part because it seems to be the part in the poem where it starts to build. The title of the poem is also very lovely. -
Excellent
In warm eyes I see passion reflected
Love helps me let go of my past
Easily leaving my fears far behind
Tonight I have come home at last
Great set up and ending words for this verse
Very well concieved
Rick



