Parker the Park keeper --
A name familiar to many,
Etched into the barks of trees,
And felt by the resting flowers.
He smiles down with the sun,
Covered by the moon's clouds.
But his presence disappears
As much as his work shows.
Author notes
Number 20: Parker
I didn't feel like writing a love/sob story about a boy named Parker, nor did I want to make Parker a tangible character of a poem. So...I just used the meaning of the name to get this poem going: Park keeper. How special.
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i think you do a good job of using the prompt to your own liking. well written in a short cute and effective poem.
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Thanks.
Bleh, sleeping then getting up at like 4 30
To wrtie an essay...horrible idea but so appealing
Have you written your essay yet?
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Hmmmm.
This one is very different!
But I like it! It's sweet :]
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Haha thanks =]
I'm thirsty... -
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Awwww. I wish I could help you, buuuut.
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I should move my lazy .ss and get some h2o
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