my dad
He's not one for praises
or one that likes to boast
he goes through life steadily
with the ones he loves the most
his dreams are realy spoken
his wants are very few
i know he often worries
wishing theres more he could do
he's always there if i need him
through times both good and bad
this man is sooo special
thats why he's my dad
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just a random poem i wrote for about my dad which he will never see haha daft or what xx
what do you think?
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that was a really good write, very sweet. good job.
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thanks x
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Aww really nice write chuck.
You made me cry but I guess you might understand why.
But yeah... Lovely chuck!!
xxxx
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Awwwh
sweet write. You should let him see this lol.
I liked it allot you had a great rhyme pattern and each stanza flown real well. Keep writing.
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why won't he see it? jw. you don't have to answer if you don't want to.
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because i wont let him see it lol, i dont see him that often anyway x
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oh. okay. that works. and great poem.
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