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Flutter of an Angels Wings

 

 

 

 

On a quiet night
You can hear the flutter
of an angels wings

and feel the warmth
of her breath
nearby as she sings

Watching over you
from the sweet
heavens above,

with the gentle
spirit of a
Mothers love

Sweet dreams delivered
as you lay your
head to sleep,

memories of her
forever; yours to
to keep~

Author notes

Horrific circumstances, may the intensity of the loss lessen allowing fond memories to flow forward allowing you and your daughter to heal. Bless you both~

Drawing by Tia

A contest entry

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  • poetryality silver member
    May 11
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    I love the fact that even in the saddest circumstances there is always Light and Hope! You brought that forth with your words and yes...there are angels all about. Congratulations on earning the Emerald Cup! I have missed you dear sister and do hope you had a blessed Mother's Day!


    Always Loving YOU ♥

    Renee


  • aslanlight
    May 6

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    Beautiful! I'm just about to lay my head down to sleep and your poem's an inspiring and lovely end to my day.

    Peace Georgia


  • BluesMan gold member
    May 5

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    Thank you Tia, for your beautiful and heart felt words of encouragement and empowerment for my little one. I know she will love and appreciate your poem as I do.


  • Summer Dawn
    April 30
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    very pretty


  • ButILoveHer silver member
    April 20
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    truely beautiful and enchanting .. would read it over and over again ...


  • buttheadsloon
    April 19

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    A wonderfully artistic piece ... one can only hope he will promptly move from his own grief to the complete love and support of that little girl!


  • Talking Toni gold member
    April 18

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    TOUCHING!!!!!

    First of all, so nice to see you back online again!!!! You have been missed!!! This was so gentle and caring and reads like a gentle whisper on the air!!! I loved it all!!! I am sure it will accomplish its intended goal here!!!! Thanks for sharing your impeccable talent with us once again!!!!!~~~Toni~~~


  • apoeticinjustice gold member
    April 18

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    beautiful and touching...it's great to see you online and writing again! The artwork is also wonderful. Another side to your talent!
    Rory


  • Cynthia Gaines gold member
    April 17

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    Thoughtfully written sentiments from the heart...

    Tia, this piece is absolutely beautiful. Angelic. The drawing is exceptional, and really compliments your lovely poem... I'm wishing you all the best!! Take care, xx Cyn xx


  • Sandygram silver member
    April 16

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    So Sweet Tia!!!!!

    A lovely poem with sweet soft imagery. A delight to read . You take care and thank you for sharing this heartfelt poem. Sandy


  • glenn shannon silver member
    April 16
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    soft and gentle a beautiful heart felt piece. thank you. glenn


  • Broken-Rickie
    April 15
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    This is beautifully written and very touching...


  • LAPoe gold member
    April 15

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    Tia, you have an amazing gift of words that help heal!! I'm sure this poem will comfort

    Laurie


  • Amera gold member
    April 15

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    This is so lovely! It has the feeling of a verse that could be read to a child before bed time. It's a soft comfort poem. The AN is really touching. So glad to see you writing again.

    Love,
    Amera♥


  • Melodies
    April 15

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    Ah, a beautiful poem of comfort and the joy of love even when there is tragedy. Sweetly penned with tenderness.


  • arafura gold member
    April 15
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    Very touching my friend. I am sure your sweet words are a comfort.


  • Nicolette gold member
    April 14

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    Such a soft, comforting feel about this angel poem, Tia... it reads like a song, a lullaby. So lovely this is. Wonderful to see you writing again too!



    ~ Nicolette


  • Lillianne Grace
    April 14

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    Beautifully written, a poem that I'm sure will bring some comfort. Best of luck to you in the contest!


  • hoodoolover silver member
    April 14

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    It's good to see a post from you, and your generous spirit shines within this, hope to read more from you soon...


    • soulfultia gold member
      April 14
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      Wrote this with the "now I lay me down to sleep" thought in my head. A little one going to bed and reading something like that to them, somehow thought it might be something I would do for my own. Thanks!


  • individuality gold member
    April 14

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    a good poem penned, thoughtful and kind, offering tenderness and warmth to another spirit in a sorrowful time.

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