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Love from This Park Bench

This bench can't hold our love
and you don't understand
as I gaze into your eyes
the passion I feel for you
It's like I'm all dressed up
with no place to go
and no one to hold me tight
the sunset holds you
while your face is all that I see
can you feel what I feel
this bench can hold us all

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  • moaner
    April 20

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    i think i understand what ur trying to say, and i can sooooo relate to that. actaully a lot! very awesome write, nicely written too x