To the greatest love of all
I go crazy when you forget to call
To you my dear I need you now
but, is this something you will allow
The best part of all is the way you kiss
but, should I tell you of this?
To the best one of them all
just remember to catch me when I fall
To the greatest love of all
I go crazy when you forget to call
A contest entry
- love gone wild by Naughtygrlred.
1000 points, ended April 23, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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again, totally relating to this! falling in love made me something i never wanted to be, im kinda glad it ended now for ALL sorts a reason! but at least ive found love that is real, and im still the same person, just with a another piece to make me whole. great write, loved lots x
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very nice love.
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I love this sweet voiced write that sums up love so neatly. I am a long way down the road from my seventeenth year, but some things never change. this made me smile.
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nice, thanks for entering
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