There's something about you,
that I just don't understand.
The way you make me feel,
is different than any other.
Your scent lingers about,
hours after our parting.
Your warm embraces,
carry me through the week.
There's something about you,
that makes me feel so free.
Whilst around you, only you,
do I feel I can really be me.
When I get your morning text,
my heart begins to flutter.
Your very presence excites me,
as well as causing deep relaxation.
There's something about you,
that amazes me so much.
You notice all the little things,
that otherwise go unseen.
You always seem to know,
just how to make me smile.
Whenever I'm around you,
*I'm comfortable enough to feel your warmth.*
Author notes
*line* is to be edited
This is still in the draft stage so constructive criticism is appreciated :)
Comments
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I love the flow of this piece and the message is quite clear.
Do reread it a few times there are a few very minor corrections needed but all in all it is a wonderfull poem to read.
I like it, I like it so!
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