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Lies within

Let me call you fool
(for that is what you are)
straight to your upturned eyes of sin
which refract and magnify what lies within.


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  • myrataal silver member
    May 19

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    Yes -- eyes the windows of the soul ...

    cannot lie -- even when lips do. We can look up in arrogance and not see the seed unfolding at our feet.

    Profoundly written reminder.

    Love
    Myra


  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    April 15
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    profoundly penned... x