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Love's Power

let go of the cares
then be at peace by
grasping the hands of safety
feel the fire of an embrace
as it melts your soul
the soft sweetness of a kiss
creates an instant bliss
feel the heartbeat with your own
to where they're rhythmically tuned
to create the melody of love

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