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what would you do?

what would you do if you were told that you were loved?
would you jump for joy or would you cry?
what would you do if the one you loved fucked with your heart?
would you forgive them or would you tear them apart?
what would you do if the one thing you were sure you had slipped from your hands?
would you look for it or would you realize that its a blessing in disguise?
what would the ones around you do if you ha suddenly died?
would they go on about their lives or would they join you?
what would you do if you suddenly lost he one you cared about?
would you cry, would you forget, would you try to fix everything that has fallen apart?
what would you do?

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  • XXCrimsonRaineXX
    2 days ago
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    This is an amazing write, and I felt I could relate to some parts of it. I've never really thought about all of these questions. Excellent write.