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Ironic.

Today I wrote a lil something for you
Today you tore my world apart.

For the once I write acctually how I feel
You move away to focus on your career.

Today I am in pain
I feel so tired.

Its cutting through me
Like a knife in warm butter.

I wish I had the answers
I wish I knew why.

I want so bad to be mad at you
But I cant be mad with you.

I keep trying to say theres a chance
My heart feels like it is done.

Shattered into a million peices
I dont know how to feel.

Author notes

Some may know I lost my job a week ago and today my girlfriend left me because she said she needed to focus on her career as an EMT.

Please tell me what you think

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  • Broken-Rickie
    April 15
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    Sorry sweetheart....
    HUGS


  • saseychik0688
    April 15
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    I'm sorry as well


  • Scandalous Beauty
    April 14

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    Ohh Will. I am so sorry that you are going through this. First your job and now your girl. Life is being vruel to you. I know I have hurt you in the past and I am sorry for that. I am always here for you if you need to talk. Great poem.

  • Scandalous Beauty
    April 14

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    Ohh Will. I am so sorry that you are going through this. First your job and now your girl friend. Life is being cruel to you. I know I have hurt you in the past and I am sorry for that. I am always here for you if you need to talk. Great poem.