Please wait.
I am sorry that you have been orbiting too near for so long.
Destructive me, ambling in darkness, knife under sleeve.
It is not me,
I am swollen now with old unease.
Please wait,
For honey and gravel in mesmerised turns of my hand;
Glistening, then twisting and pushing to leave.
That was not me,
I am foolish, yes, but do not deceive.
Please wait,
I cannot be sorry for the exchanged heat of our bodies,
Which warms then chills me in near-equal measure,
It is mine to keep,
And I will not apologise for your pleasure.
Please wait.
While consoling, cajoling and tempting appraisals,
I have laughed in the watery mouth of your well,
But I'm fragile,
Awaiting cracks in the shell.
Please wait.
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This was really nicely done. The one line that bothers me is
I am swollen for now with disease.
I had to read it a couple of times before the word placement caught on. Maybe change it around? Other than that, the descriptive words used are very refreshing and well placed. A great write.
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deafglz16
Aww its so cute... love it...
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Very sad... I'm not entirely sure what it refers to, but I'm guessing some sort of relationship (but more than friendship). I liked the repetition of 'please wait' - it sounded like begging and made it even sadder.
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Omg beautiful i can relate i think i really like this nice vibe, and it flows. Excelent.
I am foolish, yes, but do not deceive
And I will not apologise for your pleasure.
Those are my favorite lines.
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