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Hey, Big Bender!

Bending

as I unzip your yellow skin
tight jacket

I watch it
splay on the store cupboard floor.

As you slip out

and in

I let you make love

to my mouth.


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  • misterfish
    June 28
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    HAHA! Thats funny just cos its disturbing...

  • pocket pixie gold member
    April 16
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    fruity fetishist

    even did it in public


  • hamid
    April 15
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    Fantastic and beautiful!


  • charcoal
    April 14
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    cool write hehe

  • Suzanne Dia
    April 14

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    lol


    so dirty
    so bad



    i luv it


  • Emmyb gold member
    April 14

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    woooohh. i was hoping for one of these.

    absolutely gorgeous

    mmm banana


    Emma

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