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Escape To Shalott

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Escape To Shalott

From broken mirrors to spells that are cast,
she fled her castle to the isle of Shalott.
She longed for her love and his kingdom vast,
weaving dreams that took her to Camelot.

With haste she took leave avoiding the storm,
she planned her escape and took a small boat.
She hated the spell that made her conform,
yet sweet loving song arose from her throat.

Her voyage then ended in tragedy,
the spell had its way and she came to death.
The town’s people learned of this parody,
as she whispered his name and took her last breath.

The sad knight then prayed for mercy above
and begged that his Lord would watch o’er his love.

 

 

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Author notes

The Lady of Shalott is a magical being who lives alone on an island upstream from King Arthur's Camelot. Her business is to look at the world outside her castle window in a mirror, and to weave what she sees into a tapestry. She is forbidden by the magic to look at the outside world directly. The farmers who live near her island hear her singing and know who she is, but never see her.
The Lady sees ordinary people, loving couples, and knights in pairs reflected in her mirror. One day, she sees the reflection of Sir Lancelot riding alone. Although she knows that it is forbidden, she looks out the window at him. The mirror shatters, the tapestry flies off on the wind, and the Lady feels the power of her curse.
An autumn storm suddenly arises. The lady leaves her castle, finds a boat, writes her name on it, gets into the boat, sets it adrift, and sings her death song as she drifts down the river to Camelot. The locals find the boat and the body, realize who she is, and are saddened. Lancelot prays that God will have mercy on her soul.

Art Work: "The Lady of Shalott" by John William Waterhouse

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  • Papagallo
    May 22

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    Your poems are such a pleasure to read. I am always amazed by your talent. I must ask are you a mortal? Perhaps you are really a muse who has taken human form.

  • That picture gets me every time, and yer poem really does it justice.

    Excellent.

    Alex.


  • Emmyb gold member
    April 20

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    Great Fantasy Piece here!!!

    Very fitting to the picture.

    I love the little story you have spun here. You have an amazing imagination.

    well done again

    Emm


  • Garmond gold member
    April 19
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    Gentle, tragic, exquisite write.

  • "The Lady Of Shallot" is my all time favorite poem. I adore it and read it time and blessed time again. How I drank in your words paying such beautiful tribute to this wonderful and timeless verse.

    Blessed be always~
    Love~
    Az


  • Swan song gold member
    April 17
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    Beutifully woven with all the class and grace of a pure poetess


  • Pisces Pieces
    April 17

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    A beautiful compliment to the story. What a fascinating tale it is..I absolutely love fantasy and especially the medieval era!

    You do it justice!

  • Amera!!! This is exquisite!

    I absolutely love it. Perfectly rendered - staying true to the classical tale yet in your own, fresh voice.

    You are such an incredible poet.

    I'm so glad you entered!


  • Legend silver member
    April 16

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    I love the poem "The Lady of Shalott" so i was curious to see how you would portray it. I never had any fears that it would be anything more than excellent. Your sonnets lend themselves so wonderfully well to such images as those posted
    Once again i have no doubt you will make a big impact on the contest So glad i let it slip me by
    Good luck fair dancing maid


  • Daizee silver member
    April 15

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    Gorgeous picture... fantastic write. I wasn't aware of her story but there's magic in the way you weave your words Amera. I read this out loud over and over...

    Stace


  • Phallen
    April 15
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    amazing


  • Pure Thought silver member
    April 14
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    Wonderful poem as always. Thank you for the history I had forgotten.
    Buddy


  • soulfultia gold member
    April 14

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    Love the story that follows the poem. Very well written and has such wonderful flow!! Excellent work my friend and my pleasure to read ~Tia


  • Treasure 5 gold member
    April 14

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    Good luck in the contest. You have another awsome write here. You put a lot of work in it. It was a pleasure to read.


  • capricornpoet
    April 14

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    lovely tale

    Mystical tale , first time I hear of this lovely account;
    sad poem tale entwined in a lovely sonnet ...


  • melphleg gold member
    April 14

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    The Lady of Shallot is one of my favorite Tennyson pieces especially after Loreena McKennitt put it to music.
    Your piece does it justice. I had a little trouble with the flow of the second stanza. Other than, that I thought it flowed beautifully. As always your rhymes are good.


    • Amera gold member
      April 14
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      Read it in tetrameter not pentameter.
      I love Loreena McKennitt, many of my poems are inspired from her songs. I'm surprised that a guy knows her. Impressed!


  • darkyinsoul
    April 14

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    Beautiful and vivid.
    Love the forma nd the picture you have painted.
    You are wonderful and I love to read you r writes.
    Love Aleshia


  • maralisa silver member
    April 14

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    a beautiful yet truly tale of history good luck in the contest maralisa


  • Rovingone gold member
    April 14

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    A truly serene, splendid rendition of the ancient fable. Tragic Beauty is well represented in your words and the fashion used to deliver the tale.


  • cricketjeff gold member
    April 14

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    Beautiful sonnet for a beautiful story!

    Superb stuff

    Jeff

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