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"Warden of Your Hell"

You once called me the "warden of your hell"
For this I said goodbye...
Holding you back wasn't ever my forte'
You said I controlled,
So when she wore my necklace,
I turned away...
You said I didn't trust,
So when I caught you in lies,
I turned away...
You said I was never pleased,
So when you hurt me,
I turned away...
Once you called me the "Warden of your hell"
For this I said goodbye...

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hmmm... well my choice was to say goodbye, but only after I tried...

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