Verse 1
Girl I've been waiting on this long hard day to get over,
So I can rest my head right there on your shoulder,
I just wanna' lay here and feel you breath,
Listen to the rhythm of your heart-beat,
And see where it leads.
Chorus
We're wide awake but girl I wanna' make you close your eyes,
And say my name like only you can say then hold me tight,
All I need is olny you and me alone tonight,
I wanna' make you close your eyes.
Verse 2
You can make me work for it girl if you want to,
Just leave a trail for me to follow you into the bedroom,
And if you need a little bit of help from me,
Babe there's not a button that I can't reach,
Let's see where it leads.
Repeat Chorus
We're wide awake but girl I wanna' make you close your eyes,
And say my name like only you can say then hold me tight,
All I need is only you and me alone tonight,
I wanna' make yo close your eyes.
Short Final Verse
I wanna' take you somewhereout the,
Until the world fades out of sight.
Final Chorus
We're wide but girl I wanna' make you close your eyes,
And say my name like only you could say,
then hold me tight,
Just hold me tight,
All I need is only you and me alone tonight,
Yeah I wanna' makeyou our eyes ,
I wanna' make you close your eyes,
Oh Baby,
Girl I wanna' make you close your eyes.
Song Lyrics! What do think of them?
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Awe I loved this it is so sweet, and well written I will let you hold me until I fall alseep
awesome job 
Searra
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beautiful
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awww its cute!!!
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amazing
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Amazing dude. Thats freaking just...amazing.
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Tony The Tiger says.....It's.. Grrrrrrrrrrreat
This is amazing I can actually picture the guitar rhythm and drum beats going along with these lyrics nice job
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Awz Ichi I love it! this girl must be special to you...*huggles you* I hope she makes you happy
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Did she ever make you happy?
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Very romantic piece
would love to hear the music you intend for this
( there may be a place you left word or so out) the flow is soft
thank you for asking me to read this
let me know how it goes while you work on it
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definitely has song written in every line, it has the right topic for this day and age, but my only critic would be that for me , its just a little too wordy, i personally would condense the lyrics down so you say as much as you do now but with less words, other than that i think you have something here
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this is really good. :]
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nice
wow, i love it, keep up the good work
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i love it
this is a great poem and keep up the great work and read some of my new ones i just got them done this morning have a great one and see you on ap everyday i hope
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