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Hit and Run

Slowly,
walking towards nowhere,
then suddenly,
a flashing radiance,
blinded by that sudden light,
I stooped by and hug that brightness,
and started falling,
falling under,

more...


more of those energy,
of which I became addicted,

well..

beautiful doesn't mean forever,
you're beautiful,
and you won't stay forever.

Cause you're already gone.

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  • purplemoon
    May 3, 2009
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    Intresting way to interpret this title. Very lovely Poem.

    Thanks FOR ENTERING.
    Kathryn.


  • lowercase prelude gold member
    April 20, 2009

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    I like the imagery contained within the first part of this piece and the emotion in the ending portion of this poem.

    Well done