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scribble I

bangkok, 2009:
checklist, last day of conquering human race in small islands that
no one cares about;

swallow up the vendors & tourists.
check.
melt the golden shrines with
volcano breath, fire
breath, shit like that. check.
get crazy fundamentalists of
all opposing religions to kill
all remaining non-believers of their
chosen paths.
check.
cry your scaly eyes out &
retreat into the sea like
godzilla.

getting there.

Author notes

wrote this in church. i dunno if that says anything about my beliefs in god or my church.

hard-ass critique. and don't bother me about capitalization and ampersands. they won't change.

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