Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read Contests Groups Learn Forums Store Help
 

Sex

Rubber words slip through wetted lips, all meaning lost through lack of form and context, knuckles in palms steady the already frayed nerves, a distracting physical sensation, not the one I want though, tussled limbs and rowdy hair, a primal need commanded by DNA, some would fight it but I submit, Civilization a contrasting imposed state, my endowments although generous are wasted, mating dance would be simpler, many sticks woven into a home, impressed by shiny things, this one still works, I need a state of physical release, dependence on mechanical encrusted on the living, a hand offered for a cup of beans,  to my bed again.
                                                        Alone

    I plan to revise this poem: please leave constructive criticism!
    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments

  • Feste
    April 23

    Edit | Reply
    The stream-of-conscious style helped bring out the spontaneity and organic nature of the act... Nice job.

    (Incidentally, I read on your main page that you like Stephen Fry... mad props for that.)