"Do you see me?"
I'm here for you
to love and cherish
and teach what to do.
My little face will change
I'll grow up so fast
but in this picture
innocence will last!
A contest entry
- Poem for Lilly by OnceUponAMind.
625 points, ended May 2, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
How would you feel?
Comments
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awwwwwwwwwwww cute.... very nnice write..... thanks for sharing this iwth us.... hugs... missed ya..................hugs
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Very nice
Thank you for entering this sweet poem for my lilly!
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I love your work, its so diverse, this has a beautiful simplicity about it, makes me think I can smell strawberries and baby soap, and all the things that make me think of innocence, its just beautiful
have a wonderful day
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Thanks much! You are always so sweet.
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You wrote a wonderful poem for her. Capturing the feel of the picture perfectly I think! I really like the ending! Well done and best of luck!
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Thanks much! Have not wrote much but when I seen this pic I wanted to write something for it... she is so sweet in that pic!
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A very cute and well rhymed write--
Good flow of verse--
Well Done & Best of Luck in the contest!
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Thanks much!
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