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'My New Blueberry'

Oh how I love my new Blueberry.
I use it every day.
It looks so tasty and great
I feel like taking a taste.
But that would be such a waste.

I spent my money for a phone
so I could call all around
or especially home.
So I will just use my Blueberry
the way that I am supposed to.


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  • robena
    August 3
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    this is cute, made me smile. i like the uniqueness of it.


  • Emmyb gold member
    April 14

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    strange one!

    ok this made me giggle as it was a play on the word blackberry im guessing! yes i agree with blackrabbit, it is a strange combination - poetry and technology. definitely unique!

  • Blackrabbit
    April 14

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    lol, funny stuff. I think its interesting when someone writes poetry about new technology. Good job Please feel free to read and comment on my works as well. Thank you

    Rabbit