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Brianna's poem

Brianna, this poem,
I dedicate to you
it's sometimes hard to be a mom
and still do what you do.

I absolutely respect the things
you say and also how you live.
I know the wisdom comes from deep,
as does the love you give.

Your status as a silly mommy
defines the life you lead.
However, I know there's tons about you
not everyone gets to see. 

Although you may have missed on classes,
I'm confident that you know
more about a fulfilling life
than a lot of people I know.

The last four lines is always tough
I want to make it mean well.
So I guess I'll say that I think you're right,
it's the religious who are going to hell.




lol ok...bad rhyme. hee hee





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  • La fanciulla
    April 20
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    I love Brianna!
    She is pretty awesome, I must say.
    Sweet poem, Sam


  • XcPrincessB
    April 14

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    Awww

    I assume (and I could be wrong) that this is about your Mum (or Mom) depending from which country you hail!
    Great rhyme... didn't seem forced. I liked the pce of the poem too!
    I like the last four lines... mostly they ae used to sum up a poem and that's hard t do about an amazing person.
    Instead you chose to display how truly unique she is with a saying of hers.
    Congrats on a good piece of writing.