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Angel Watch(Revisited)

Angel Watch (Dedicated to PaintedParisPassion)
by  Sis. Pearl

So here I am Doc
with anticipation of course
I dear not complain about
this uninvited guest I lost

It was quiet scary,
to say the least
though I joking ranted,
somebody call the tumor police
as I began to panic

Yes it is critical said Doc
and must leave immediately
when suddenly I felt
and a great calm rushing over me

Though as I began to surrender
into what seem so heavenly
the doctor spoke in his tongue (confused)
while the anesthesia took over me

And what seemed like minutes
proved more than a few hours
my eyes began to glean to the
bright lights in the corridor

Then to my amazement as I listened
to my tummy, came a loud rumbling sound
like a roar from the shrubbery and there
I Lie helpless by this recent recovery

Without the uninvited guest
who no longer is apart me
due too merciful hands and
Angels who watch over me



*You’re in my Prayers Lady

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  • This is really sad. It makes me cry. Its not exactly dirty pretty, but I understand why you wrote it and where you were coming from. So thank you very much for writing this and sharing it in my contest. Good luck and thank you.

    -B

    • pearlstp
      May 12
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      Your welcome

      JUST FOR YOU YOUNG LADY... I HOPE ALL THINGS ARE SWELL...THANKS