I am your very existence, yet you never see me beyond your needs.
A contest entry
- just a single sentence by Lavender Butterfly.
450 points, ended April 15, 38 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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A concept to ponder. So very sad and unfortunate, but often true nonetheless.
Insightful and deep, as you always are!
♥

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so real... x
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so true of many relationships! i am just checking out what one could say in only one sentence. good job. thank you for sharing it with me today and i wish you the best of luck in this contest that you have entered. viyanna rosemarie

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The need of the few outweigh the needs of the one. Taken for granted for so long, will they realize the truth and devotion when they find themselves alone. Strongly delivered and powerful in meaning.
Best to you.
GM





