Reaching for his gentleness, she could not grasp
oh, the love he had for her and she for him
but doubting herself and his love too
ill, wondering if he knew how much his love means
Reasoning with herself, she pondered his motives
only she could not lie to herself another minute
bringing herself to tears, she instantly concluded
I'll love him forever, no one shall EVER take his place
Author notes
Prompt: I love you
A contest entry
- Prompts Listed. by Riftkin.
700 points, ended April 23, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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Nicely done with the prompt you took.
Best of luck to you with this.
Riftkin
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very human
A good poem about a very natural human theme...uncertainty and reassurance in love. Good luck in the contest.
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