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midnight hand

if you write one more
emo  song
i swear ill chop off your writing arm
the waves are crashing over oh woe is me
pull yourself back together
man you got it rough with your money and your fame
it sounds to me like someones lying
just to play the game
so pack your bags and start your running
ill send you a razor twice!
end up living
cause your not quite dead
who wants to save your life?


so pack your bags
and start your runnin'
your not quite dead
cause your living it
so pack up your bags
and live through morning
you can make it through to midnight
twice!

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