Can you see the love I feel for you?
or are we through?
Do you hear the music I play for you?
or should I try something knew?
Can you taste the kiss I send for you?
or was this just the flue?
Do you feel the hurt as I hurt?
or do you just want me to loose my shirt?
Can you feel me as I reach for you?
or is my heart just not here for you?
Do you care for me just as I care for you?
or is my love not felt by thee...?
Can you see baby this is just for you?
or is this for someone knew?
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Excellent
'tis a very fine write, indeed. Imagery; rhythm, and rhyme are just fine. You have expressed your thoughts quite well. Thanks for sharing.
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ok, this is getting really freaky now! you write like you watched some home movies of my past or something, im just not as casual about my past boyfriends, they were bad! and i must acknowledge that in every poem i write. this is totally fantastic though, loving your style x
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