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Cat Turds

Screams from downstairs
I awake to the rescue
chasing my furry feline
away from my sisters
outstretched foot
steering her away from
the crusted black
digested mice rolling like
miniature grenades
in poopy cylinders
across the floor.
Shit happens.

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  • sanch011
    September 5, 2009

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    It’s said that when a cat brings you food, such as a mouse, they really like you. Now a digested mouse is a sure sign of love and respect they don’t want you wasting your time on the digestion of said mouse or to embarrass yourself by shitting the mouse.

    Loved the poem


  • Saxy Tenor Babe
    August 7, 2009
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    Fantastic

    OMG!! I love this Kar...such beauty...no seriuosly I do like the cliche at the end it's got a nice ring to it.

  • momentarylapse
    July 14, 2009
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    haha.indeed.


  • A Pen Man
    April 22, 2009
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    I really should have tried not sounding like a five year old stupid kid, ah well, fuck it, whats done is done.


  • A Pen Man
    April 22, 2009

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    hah

    quite literal this one eh? The last line reminds me of the bit in Forest Gump where he runs through the dog poop!

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