Water
Red roses unfurling
Misty clouds
Swirling about me
Into me
Down deep dark
Never find me
Down my fingers
Drip drop
Unfurling cloud flowers
Warm bright
Becoming
Turning
Cool dark
O lovely day
Peace at last
Underneath it sleeping
The watery red sky
Author notes
Written March 5th, 2004
A contest entry
- I want to feel so sad, Gimme what'cha got... by PoEtS-bLeEd-InK.
300 points, ended June 20, 2006, 21 entries
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This is a very well composed poem. I like it alot.
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good luck in my comp very well written.
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This is a decent write, keep up the work, Good luck.
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