velvet red rose
soft as silk
and smells like heaven
dark like blood
but, ravaged by the sun
as the tips begin to wilt
turning brown and getting crisp
don't be scared water saves all
just give me one last smell
A contest entry
- Picture Prompt Quicky by dutch2lips.
700 points, ended April 14, 6 entries
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cute, but im not sure on the background? if this is MENT to have a darker side attached to it, it is spot on. if not, id change to the white background. liked it anyway. funny enough my nickname by some is still flower! you dont want to know why though hahaha lets just put it this way-im a little shameless hahahaha
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short. intresting. Why did you use orange instead of red?
4/5 for the poem, and 3/5 for the coloring. 4/5 for the message. And a 3/5 for the picture that the poem gives
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a good poem, very descriptive, thank you for entering!
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i feel as tho i can smell it right now, as tho it was here in my hand. great work.
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aww, this is beautiful. i love it.
such vivid imagery and description,
well written, exellent work.
ElectricBloom
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thank you so much i work hard and am glad that you enjoy my work...
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