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Fire Side

the candle burns hot wax
as the fire is not needed
for the heat from our bodies
and the way we cuddle close
you make me feel as one
with your body at last
your colon smells the sweetest
and your body feels the warmest
but  compassion is the best
just lay with me
at this fire side and feel it too




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  • JeannieD Hunter gold member
    April 17

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    This describes intimacy very well. Just
    laying together enjoying the moment.
    Well done. Thanks for entering and
    good luck.


  • jackreed3 gold member
    April 13
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    That reminds me and my wife 10 years ago...
    nice write and very sweet poem.... JackReed3