Goodbye,
it breaks my heart.
Mind numb; soul aching,
pages of our life burnt to ash.
Still; I'm left with this longing desire,
to feel your passion once again.
All I see are shadows;
waving at me,
goodbye.
Author notes
Prompt: Title (Goodbye)
Wordbank: shadow, break, longing, desire, pages, burned, numb and aching. Every word must be used and any tense of the word is fine.
Form: Rictameter
A rictameter is a poem containing 9 lines in which the first and last line must be the same. The syllable count by line is as follows; 2-4-6-8-10-8-6-4-2. They are a great way to express your feelings about someone or something.
A contest entry
- Rictameter/word bank Please begin and end with goodbye by piccola.
1500 points, ended April 20, 13 entries
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Comments
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lovely rictameter, good flow in it along with maintaining its shape..
emotions very well expressed..
All the best!
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Thank you so much for the lovely words and the applauses. I haven't written for some time and it feels good to be back. I will be on more as time allows and look forward to your works. All my best wishes for you too! seamaiden
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glad to hear you are back at it..I toowas 'out' for sometime....so know how it feels...
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Glad you are back too. You have a nice day also!
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