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Echo en Concerto

 

 

 

the difference between

a false statement and

a lie

is intent

 

the former but a derivative

of misconception

which is of course a human trait

 

and a mirror intends nothing

 

yet another human trait

if you are indeed human

which implies heart, or soul, or

whatever it is that holds compassion

 

for I am the image

and the vision

expressed through metaphor

because you never really knew me

 

and I watch as the seams leak

from the center of the lie that you created

and wrap themselves around the misconception

 

of my creation

 

how ironic, if not trite

standing here

watching the blood

trickle from between the shards

 

 

 

 

 

 

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  • Metaphorist
    April 14
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    My brain hurts. I don't like it


  • oldschoolhero gold member
    April 14
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    for real.


  • sweet arrival gold member
    April 13

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    this is an eerie one. you are a master with words and i feel incompetent to even translate. expressing an image through metaphor takes talent, but expressing self using direct words takes courage. doing both is genius, and you are just that.

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