We had the strongest bond
But I kept pulling the strings
Now our love is falling apart
And I'm regreting all I've done
We can't get back together
Because of what I've done
We can not love each other
Because our bond is gone
If you could forgive me
Maybe I could stop crying
If you could look at me
Then maybe I could dream
But until that time comes
Our love is no longer here
Until I can forgive myself
Our bond is gone..
Author notes
Ummm I didn't write it cause of a lost relationship. Lol I just wrote it cause I was bored. Lol I don't have a boyfriend.
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It is great
I can feel the emotion in every single word! it is great keep it up!!
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Sanks! You are to kind!
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This is a great write keep up the great work
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Thank you very much. ^-^
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I loved your picture it is really nice. If you really love him you should talk to him and try to work things out.
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Lol thx but I just wrote it. I don't have a boyfriend or anything. Lol
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Wow this poem is really sad. I'm assuming it's been written about a lost relationship. How unfortunate.
Great picture by the way, you must be an amazing artist.
But just a word, I think you may have left the 't' out of 'strongest' in the first line, it says 'stronges'.
Great poem though, I enjoyed reading it. =]
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Thx I am glad you liked it. And no it isn't about a lost relationship. I just came up with it when I was sad. Lol. I like to draw and write it is what I do.
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well you do it well so don't stop
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Lol Alright I won't. Lol ^-^
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