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Slipping

Here i am again
crying on my floor
here i am again
walking out that door
here i am again
wondering what in the hell
here i am again
ringing the bell
round two
round three
round four
i don't want to deal any more
round five
round six
round seven
i'll never pass the hell
that leads to heaven

I'm sick to my stomach
gonna throw up
i'm sick to my stomach
i'm all fucked up

I'm slipping
down the muddy hill
I'm slipping
my mouth is filled
I'm slipping
I'm gonna drown
I'm slipping slipping
down down down

Author notes

I know it's inconsistant, but so are my thoughts.

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  • Maybe Anastasia
    April 14

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    nooo the inconsistancy works! I loved it. it had a cool flow to it. It made me want to more with the words. great write. and hang in there.


    • Dygurl
      April 14
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      Thank you for the comment, i'm glad you liked it, and thank you for the encouraging words.