she has a complex confidence
knowing all too well that someone will stop
once they gaze into heavy painted eyes
revealing slits of blue like that of a cats
her hair's tied down to sheild itself from the wind
her face structured like a manoquin
she throws her thumb over the desolate street
always waiting
just waiting.
Author notes
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very powerful
these lines my friend say so very much, I can feel from your words the sadness flowing from the prompt, even though I have not seen the picture as of yet,I wish you well my little poetic friend,,,blessings of light,life,laughter,,Firestorm
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Beautiful, my friend. Drips sadness and loneliness with a hint of hope in there. Wonderful take on the prompt.
Amy
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Wow, absolutely marvelous piece.
Fantastic imagery here, and alot said in so few words. Bravo!
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This is pretty good, even before I looked at the picture.
You paint your own visual atmosphere for the minds eye with words here.
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