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Everything i say

Your close your ears
When i talk of the lord
You disregard what i say
You dont hear a word.

Dont confuse my intentions
And what im trying to do
But dont think I dont care
Because thats far from true

I know how truely hard it is
To leave your old life behind
But even you said it yourself
"Im Broken.Blind"

Your a wonderful person
I can see it in your eyes
I just hope everything I say
Will be enough to suffice

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  • Treasure 5 gold member
    April 13

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    A lot of people close there ears to the Lord becaus they don't believe. The ones of us that believe has our ears open to the word.