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Seams

Let's fall apart together
and hope for the best
Let's lose all control
and guess what's next
Let's cut the ties
and live free
Let's break the bonds
that hold together our seams.

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not serious. not thoughtful. not me.

I write for fun. So give me an opinion, because that's what it is your opinion.

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  • GothicFyre
    May 16

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    Well I liked it, and I loved the great simplicity of it. I also liked the carefree tone of it - that was a refreshing write!